Are we there yet?

So here (finally) is page 21 where we see The Company’s soldiers and the Libby controlled Robot (Robbie) on the way to The East Groups Labs to cause a bit of trouble.

I’ve started using thumbnails to preplan the page layouts so I figured I’d include them as an alternative to the original full detail pencils which I no longer do… these are really loose and quick and I’ll do a few of them before settling on the final layout. They’re also pretty small, 4 or 8 to an A4 page.

With the page itself I have again tried to use some various techniques in an attempt to improve the look.

This time around I’ve been playing around with various highlighting options, the chopper in the first panel being a good example.

Let me know what you think:)

As always any and all feedback is most appreciated.

Cheers

JP

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